> Sorry but also,

Try not to start every sentence with the same word(s) ("Our" / "We 
have").
There are many way to structure the same sentence without starting it 
with "We" or "Our"

Rod


-----Original Message-----
From: NAME REMOVED [mailto:NAME REMOVEDarora@m...]
Sent: Tuesday, 4 February 2003 12:33 PM
To: HTML Code Clinic
Subject: [html_code_clinic] Feedback

I would like feedback on how to improve my site at
http://www.erols.com/pritamarora


The only places that are weak are below the bullets were it says "We". I 
am not going to change two instances of "Our". Can you recommend good 
substitus for the "We" section?

I am not that good at English. Please leave the section "our" alone.

Sincerely,

NAME REMOVED Arora
Webmaster,
DEI